The Murim Abolitionist 02 / 06

CHAPTER 02

The Price of Gold, the Price of Lives

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Editorial chapter overviewSpoilers · plot structure, decisions, and progression constraints

Fourteen graves for fifteen people stand beside the smaller grave containing Yeonhwa’s two severed fingers. Jin Cheol cannot accept Namgung Tae’s gold as a price for the dead, while Yeonhwa counts thirty-two surviving mouths and distinguishes what money can do from what it cannot. The magistrate refuses jurisdiction; the Murim Alliance office places dead people and damaged houses together beneath “compensation sufficient.”

Yeonhwa converts the twenty gold taels into a communal survival fund restricted first to rice, medicine, and roofs. That night, her three-fingered hand can no longer work an ordinary loom. She refuses Jin Cheol’s offered hand and sketches a new loom whose treadle opens the warp while her right hand carries the shuttle. Her injury therefore produces an independent need and invention rather than functioning only as Jin Cheol’s guilt.

Their investigation also begins with failure. A kitchen knife that seemed thrown by the blast was dropped while its owner cut a child’s rope, and witnesses disagree about direction. Only after preserving those contradictions do the remaining pieces of bent metal reveal the amplified rebound. The masters did not intend mass death, but chose the valley because their weapons rang more powerfully there and never considered whose lives would bear the risk.

Clerk Bak Munsu’s hidden ledger expands one disaster into forty-three cases across twelve years. Yeonhwa accepts the dangerous copy and devises date-only future tips; Jin Cheol helps put the papers into the clerk’s sleeve. The last entry already plans to rewrite Cheonggye’s fifteen deaths as lightning, turning the couple from victims of one duel into custodians of evidence against a recurring system.

Beside the small grave where Yeonhwa’s two fingers lay buried, the people of Cheonggye Village dug fourteen graves for their dead.

Ten adults. Three children. And two wooden tablets bearing only names, for bodies that could not be recovered in human form. Fifteen people had died in all. Jin Cheol’s parents shared one coffin and one grave because no one could tell which bone fragments recovered from the smithy had belonged to whom.

Jin Cheol took up a shovel with his right arm bound in a sling around his neck. Every movement of the cloth stuck to his burns tore at his flesh. The villagers tried to stop him, but he dug left-handed. Only after hearing the dull impact of earth against a coffin fourteen times did he set the shovel down.

Yeonhwa did not sit beside the graves. Her left hand was swaddled in thick medicinal cloth. With her right, she counted rice jars and people.

“Thirty-two mouths tonight. Seven who can’t walk and two nursing infants. We have nine measures of rice left. Made into gruel, it will last eleven days.”

“Today is the funeral,” Jin Cheol said.

“So we starve after the dead?”

Without looking at him, Yeonhwa wrote the numbers again. She lacked the strength to grind ink, so she wrote on cloth with a piece of charcoal. Blood seeped from the places where her ring finger and little finger had been, but her hand did not stop.

Jin Cheol felt the purse of gold inside his robe. Whenever he took it out, Namgung Tae’s voice came with it. There is more than enough to rebuild your homes.

“Don’t use that.”

“Then what do we buy rice with?”

“I’ll earn it.”

At last, Yeonhwa looked up.

“With one arm? Enough for thirty-two people, within eleven days?”

Jin Cheol had no answer.

The following day, fever still burning in his right arm and the blisters on his back sticking to his clothes at every step, he carried a petition bearing eight victims’ thumbprints to the district office. The judicial clerk saw the names Wi Sohyeon and Namgung Tae and shut the door.

“A contest between martial artists goes to the Murim Alliance liaison.”

“The dead were not members of the murim world.”

“Which means we cannot arrest the men who killed them. You understand that, don’t you?”

He pushed the petition back. Its edge caught on Jin Cheol’s bandage and crumpled.

The Murim Alliance liaison office stood directly across the wall from the government compound. An armed warrior guarded the entrance, and incense perfumed the rooms within. The official in charge examined Namgung’s purse of gold before he looked at the paper Jin Cheol had brought.

“Compensation has already been made.”

“Who agreed to it?”

“Hero Namgung voluntarily paid twenty taels of gold, and the Sword Saint expressed his regret. The Alliance would normally require less.”

The brush tip glided across the ledger. The official wrote: Eleven civilian homes damaged. Fifteen dead. Compensation sufficient.

“Why are fifteen people and eleven houses on the same line?”

“Because that is the space for recording losses.”

“A dead child and a collapsed cowshed go in the same space?”

The official set his brush down.

“I understand your grief. But these men are pillars of the righteous sects. If the Demonic Cult comes, they are the ones who stand between it and villages like yours. Great responsibilities leave blemishes.”

Jin Cheol wanted to wrench the ledger away. His left hand clutched the edge of the desk. But the guard moved faster, pressing the end of his scabbard onto the back of Jin Cheol’s hand. The man used little force, yet Jin Cheol felt as if the bones were grinding together.

“Leave.”

Shoved into the street, Jin Cheol stood between the government office and the liaison office while rainwater ran from both roofs into the same gutter. The signs above the doors differed. What flowed back to Cheonggye Village did not.

That night Jin Cheol carried the purse of gold to the river. He loosened its mouth and tipped it over the water.

“Will throwing it away make you feel better?”

Yeonhwa spoke from behind him. Her freshly bandaged left hand was held against her chest.

“Every time we spend this, they’ll believe they paid the right price.”

“You’re going to manage their beliefs for them too?”

“This is the price of human lives.”

“No. Gold is only worth the price of gold.”

Yeonhwa took the purse from his hand. She drew out one piece, neither biting it nor holding it up to the light. She merely weighed it in her palm.

“Two seom of rice. Twenty packets of medicine. Enough roofing straw to last through winter. That is what gold can do. It cannot buy back a single dead person.”

“That’s why—”

“Thirty-two people still have to eat tomorrow morning.”

Yeonhwa unfolded the cloth she had marked with charcoal. The names of the dead filled the first line. The next listed the survivors’ injuries. Beneath that, lost homes and fields had been recorded separately.

“I will not put lives and possessions in the same space. We won’t divide the gold as if any part of it belongs to one person. We’ll use it in common, and record where every coin goes.”

“The moment we accept that money, the matter is over.”

“If we throw it away, it ends even sooner. If you have strength enough to be angry, buy rice first. You need to fetch medicine tomorrow as well.”

Blood spread along the edge of Yeonhwa’s bandage. Jin Cheol still stood in the ruins of the smithy; Yeonhwa was already counting the next day for thirty-two survivors. He had thought of her only as someone he must protect. She was the one walking out of the wreckage first. He closed the purse, took it back from the river, and the next morning followed her list: rice first, medicine second.

Not everyone agreed to use the gold as a common fund. The tavern keeper, who had lost his son, wanted it divided into fifteen portions for the bereaved families. Those who had lost homes but no kin argued that then they would have no roofs by winter.

Yeonhwa opened a blank ledger before them.

“We will not divide death into measures of gold. Nor will we measure whose grief is greater. Instead, we will spend first on the things that will kill more people if we do not attend to them now: rice, medicine, and roofs. For the time being, let us use it only for those three.”

“And when the gold runs out?” the tavern keeper asked.

“Then we will all be poor together. At least we will not be left fighting over whose son’s price was spent first.”

Eleven people placed their thumbprints beneath the decision. The two who opposed it still received the same rice and medicine. One tael bought rice and the next paid the physician; at the top of the ledger Yeonhwa wrote: *Twenty taels left by Namgung Tae. Not settlement money. Held as the common survival fund of Cheonggye Village.*

That night she set a length of hemp on the loom. Her three remaining fingers pushed two warp threads together, and the shuttle caught halfway through. The second attempt caught in the same place. When Jin Cheol reached to help, she struck the back of his hand with the shuttle.

“My hand is short. That doesn’t mean you have one to spare.”

She studied the loom leg, then drew in charcoal on the floor: a lever worked by the foot to part the warp, a shuttle the right hand could drive alone. The first sketch leaned badly. Yeonhwa left it there and tested the line three times with her toe. “On the next loom, the feet can work.”

Jin Cheol put his foot over the drawing. She raised the shuttle. “Planning to lend me that too?”

He moved it.

Once they began spending the money, Jin Cheol began to move as well. He could not yet lift a hammer with his half-healed arm, but he sorted usable iron from the ruins: pieces softened by fire, pieces split within by impact, and pieces that could be used again if reheated.

At the place where he had found his parents’ remains, he discovered three nails. They had melted with a roof beam and fused to blackened fragments of bone. For a long while Jin Cheol sat without being able to separate them. At last he brushed away the ash with a small chisel.

Each nail had taken the fire differently. One had a flattened head, another a bent shank, and the last a melted point. Each gave a different note.

He wrapped all three in cloth and tucked them inside his robe. Burying them might have brought him peace. But he needed evidence more than peace.

Jin Cheol measured bent sickles, cauldrons, door rings and roof nails while Yeonhwa recorded them in the ledger margins. A direction appeared on the first day—too quickly. The kitchen knife they marked as blast-thrown had actually fallen from a woman’s hand while she cut a child loose.

“Iron doesn’t lie,” Jin Cheol said.

“People can lie on its behalf. You can misread it too.”

When testimonies conflicted, Yeonhwa erased neither. The miller’s wife says east. The tavern keeper says north. When Jin Cheol told her choosing one would make the picture cleaner, she set down the charcoal.

“A clean record is not the same as an accurate one.”

He copied that sentence onto the ledger’s first page. They removed the kitchen knife, retained both conflicting accounts, and only then saw the remaining iron bent away from the valley: the returning force, not the first blow from above.

Jin Cheol suspended the broken bell from a rope and struck it at several locations. At the mouth of the valley, the sound was brief. Between the cliffs where the two masters had stood, the same note returned twice, louder than before. On the third vibration, the suspension rope pulled taut against his palm.

“Could they truly not have known?” Yeonhwa asked.

Jin Cheol did not answer at once. Masters of Wi Sohyeon and Namgung Tae’s stature could not have failed to hear a resonance that even he perceived. Yet there was no sign they had chosen the place intending to kill Cheonggye Village.

“They could have known,” he said. “Not how many houses would fall. But they knew the qi waves came back stronger from those cliffs.”

“Then why do it here?”

Jin Cheol looked up at the sword scars on the cliff.

“Because their sword and saber rang louder here.”

Jin Cheol and Yeonhwa took their findings back to the government office. The judicial clerk turned them away at the door, but Bak Munsu, the young secretary who had read the original petition, came to find Jin Cheol that night. His hat was pulled low, and he kept looking over his shoulder.

“Say you never spoke to me during the day.”

The secretary led them to the archive and spread dust-coated ledgers across the floor. The covers said flood, landslide, fire. The margins said: *embankment damaged after a Cheongram Sect elder’s duel; homes burned during an Ironblood Gang pursuit; sword qi misfired by a Mount Hua lay disciple, seven dead.* It happened every year. The government rewrote causes; the Alliance checked payment. No punished name appeared.

“Why are you showing us this?” Jin Cheol asked.

The secretary’s lips trembled.

“One of the seven who died three years ago was my younger sister. Since then, all I have done is copy the records. I never dared bring them out.”

He held out one slim volume. It contained forty-three incidents spanning twelve years, recording their dates, the sects involved, and the number of victims.

Jin Cheol did not take it. The moment he put it inside his robe, he would cease to be merely a victim and become a thief of hidden records. There would be no road back to either the government office or the Murim Alliance.

Yeonhwa accepted the book first.

“Leave the original here and take only a copy. If they discover it, say you know nothing.”

“They will know from my handwriting even if I deny it.” The secretary swallowed dryly. “After tonight, I may never be able to touch these ledgers again.”

Yeonhwa tore several blank sheets from her own ledger and offered them to him.

“Then from now on, send only the dates you remember. We will confirm the names. Don’t carry everything alone.”

The secretary could not bring himself to take the paper. His hands shook. Jin Cheol folded the sheets in half and slipped them into the man’s sleeve. If he sent only dates, there would be neither sentences to expose his hand nor originals that could be called stolen.

By the secretary’s candle, Jin Cheol found the last entry, its ink still wet: *Cheonggye Village. Fifteen dead. Cause to be amended to lightning.* He pressed his left thumb beside his name. Without seal paste it left only sweat, but the choice felt no less final.

“From now on, we leave none of these cases buried as finished.”

At dawn, he and Yeonhwa left with a ledger more dangerous than gold.